lunes, 17 de agosto de 2009

English Homework

Talk in past...

My name is Johana. I was born in Bogota, but since I was a child, I came with my parents, to live here to Barranquilla. We came her from 1990 to 2009. Actually we are happy and we like to enjoy to make many things.

When I was a child I used to play with my dolls, with my sister, and I imagined that I was teacher, also, I loved to skate with the friends of my neigborhood. I used to travel with my parents every years on December and we visited my Grandmother and my uncles. Really we enjoyed it. Well, I have a pretty family and we always have been united.
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7 comentarios:

  1. SamirCH19 de agosto de 2009, 6:14

    Hi, Johy, In your description, below of your title, you have two mistakes, after of verb "Love" the next verb is infinitive plus "ing" for example; "I love studing English and going out with my friends" this is sentence correct.

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  2. andrews20 de agosto de 2009, 17:31

    Hi, don't writte ''I loved to skate'' the better form to say is ''I loved skating'' bye

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  3. S.S20 de agosto de 2009, 17:45

    Ups! you forgot a letter in the second line and you can say …"We have live here from..."

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  4. MAGUIE20 de agosto de 2009, 17:52

    Hi, you had a mistake when you wrote : "We came her"... is :" we came here...".

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  5. Lorena Lara B.22 de agosto de 2009, 13:50

    Hi Johana!
    You wrote “I love to skate” and it's correct. You can say: “I love to skate” or “I love skating”. However, you have the following mistakes:

    1. I love study English
    2. …on weekend.
    3. but since I was a child, I came with my parents, to live here to Barranquilla. We came her from 1990 to 2009.
    4. we like to enjoy to make many things.
    5. I loved to skate with the friends of my neighborhood.
    6. …every years…
    7. …these is a interesting…

    I think that the correct way is:

    1. I love to study English or I love studing English
    2. …on weekends.
    3. But I came with my parents here to Barranquilla since I was a child. We stay here from 1990.
    4. we enjoy making many things.
    5. I loved to skate with friends in my neighborhood or I loved to skate with neighbors (it depends)
    6. …every year…
    7. …these is an interesting…

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  6. elsy beleno25 de agosto de 2009, 14:51

    HI, JOHY!!! I BELIEVE ITS ¨BETTER SAY "ENJOY MAKING" BECAUSE AFTER OF ENJOY IS USED THE VERB FOLLOWING WITH ING. BYE!!!!!!

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  7. Kelly Flórez26 de agosto de 2009, 11:20

    Hi Johana. You have a lot of mistakes in your blog. You should read it and self-evaluation.
    You must apply the knowledge acquired at the level

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